Song of Sweetness

You know, when the blue butterflies roam
Outside my tiny wooden broken window,
My mind thinks of you, and in their coloured wings
I find the glimpses of your smiling memories
Embedded with a familiar softness of your voice
Their flight reminds me of your pure innocence
And in that moment, my soul can touch and feel
The presence of your loving spirit, crafted in sweetness.

Reviews

[Shannon]

Romantic, hints at tragedy perhaps in love, maybe in life as well.

[Kasey Miriam]

I really enjoyed this...made me think of my late great grandpa

[Sunburn]

Many thank yous... I'm glad my little poetry could relate with your life...

[Karen Redburn]

So sweet, every memory compared to the gentle butterfly and it's wings. This is purely soft and gentle memories, love it!

[Sunburn]

Thank you so much for your kind words... I'm glad my little work could mean something to you...

[J. J. Nightingale]

Beautiful........Real

Their flight reminds me of your pure innocence ...

Nice !!!!

Jazzy

[Sunburn]

Thank you Jazzy... So very kind of you... I'm so glad that you liked it...

[J. J. Nightingale]

YOU ARE WELCOME.....................:).........