TRAGIC STAR

after the realisation that many of showbiz greats die the same way or have similar fates, i drew from that and wrote this piece.

A sinful bed she lies in,

A man with a white colar entertains her lust,

Stringless sex is the game she plays.

young boys purity she has endured in it,

Till she could not resist the last of it.

 

Blasphemy she commits without care,

She walks the ends of the earth as if she were a god.

Shamelessly she violates the vows she swore to keep,

Man after man they leave her quaters,

Oh but she takes pride in her harlot ways.

 

Abnotious she is with an attitude even the devil cannot stand.

Arrogance makes her face look like a pit of fire,

After a speedy sinful life,

She finally takes a bow and leaves the world in a golden coffin,

To a hot place known only to the dead.

 

Only stupidity was shown in the days of her youth.

Even her corpse laughs at her utter idiocity.

As the 'grievers' see her lifeless body,

They cry a little more when they see on her face like most stars,

A mastarch of powderly bliss,

May her soul rest in peace,

Though the pearly gates of heaven willnot welcome her.

Reviews

[Cassie]

My biggest fun, this is such a great poem, had not read it before, i like this " Abnotious she is with an attitude even the devil cannot stand" and the final stanza, basically the whole poem is a nice read. I love it. thumbs up!!

[Infurno-Blaze]

thou hath fame thou art damn'd....lovely poem dear...its very sensitive and emotional...

[Poetic-pRiNcEsS]

lolz dont cry..thanks for the review

[Lethu]

Ignorance is bliss, the world should be ashamed. Living life without a care and indulging in sin without a conscience. We live for today, not puting tomorrow into consideration. Well put indeed.

[Poetic-pRiNcEsS]

thanks a billion!