leting him go

I attempt to catch my own tears fallen from my eyes,

Yet they refuse to stay on my hands.

Each cloud resembles his sweet face,

At night the stars look like his eyes.

The sweet smell of the garden remind me of him.

Everytime it rains the rain drops feel like his kisses.

I wish i could taste his lips again,

Listen to his heartbeat again.

The sound of singing birds attempts to compensate,

The orchestric sound of the place i used to call home, his heart..

I cant let him go, he was my life, the very best of it.

I cant live without him, my true purpose.

Letting him go is like a plea for sudden death to take me to my final resting place.

 

Reviews

[Cassie]

I love it, so emotional it is

[Lethu]

The personification in this piece is outstanding, good writing indeed.

[Poetic-pRiNcEsS]

thnx lethu

[Izzy-01]

i love it ....the emotions were expressed in such a realistic way i couldnt have done it better my self.
A good read

[Poetic-pRiNcEsS]

thanks a million #bright smile.

[Julie Wolfe]

This is an amazing poem i love it