When Angels Cry

Angelic tear drops 

Black pearls bleed from red rimmed clouds

Preciuos feather lost.

Reviews

[Sira YR]

So much expressed in only three lines of poetry. Not all writers are able to do that. This just shows how talented you are to envoke so much thought in so few lines. Wonderful Job, Poetic Licence. The critique I'd make- and this is just grammatical- is that you misspelled precious. However, besides that one little thing, it was really good. I applaud you, Poetic Licence, I truly applaud you.

[wordman]

when angels cry ,black diamonds can be found,as the tears waters the ground,making trees grow tall and strong.

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful use of words and thoughts. You made the reader understand the words dear Poet. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote