Tech-Know-Love

A lil' technology twist on love

 

Tech-know-love

 

You send these messages to my body

That get forwarded to my brain and

Stored in the inbox of my heart.

My mind has you on re-dial,

You’re my fav’ number,

And the only one in ‘my circle.’

If I could, you would be permanently

Embedded into My space.

Don’t you see? You are the perfect

Background for my page,

And if you had ten profiles

They’d all be on my top list.

I want you to fill up my albums

With your face, all of these pictures

Of stilled moments frozen in time.

Frozen in happiness…

You are my reflection…

In a world full of lonely people…

I found you.

 

Author's Note

I started writing this one night after missing my boyfriend, I was starring at my phone and just started writing how I felt..I hope you enjoy it...

Reviews

[Que]

I always enjoy tech-savvy pieces. Some of my favorite songs (Reboot My Heart - The Cinnamon Fuzz & Hyperlink [Deep Down] - Effiel 65) are techno-loves. I'm definately adding this to that list even though it's a poem!

Thanks for posting this, it made my day.

~Que

[perfectlymetiKulous]

Oh I loved it. It was sweet and sentimental without the cheesiness. :)

[Kgosi]

"Frozen in happiness�You are my reflection�In a world full of lonely people�I found you." beautifully put... get choice of authenticity.... great choice of words, -i love this piece :)

[Britteny]

It's funny how inspiration comes to a writer huh? I have done simular things with my own poetry. I absolutly love this poem and love poems can come off being either cheesey and full of cliches or heartfelt. I feel that this poem is both sincerely written and heartfelt and it shows through in the writing. Thanks for the read request, it's such a cute romantic poem and a great read! Keep on writing and I'll keep on reading your work!!!!

[Serend1p1ty]

Oh stunning.
Stunning.
The way you make an extended metaphor of emailing & wow, just blew me away.
This shows such skill & talent, was really impressed.
Wonderfully written.

Yours truly,
cloud6

[everwander]

Such a sweet poem.

The flow is very smooth and the imagery attached to this is beautiful.

Very well written, definitely one of the best I have read in a while :)

[ICE]

Honestly, this was amazing
I especially loved the lines,

"You're my fav' number,
And the only one in 'my circle.'
If I could, you would be permanently
Embedded into My space.
Don't you see? You are the perfect
Background for my page,
And if you had ten profiles
They'd all be on my top list."

The words 'I found you' is like a caress at the end of it all.

That is just brilliant! It is well writen piece of art and you should be so proud of yourself!
Great Job! Can' wait to read more from you!