Tech-Know-Love

A lil' technology twist on love

 

Tech-know-love

 

You send these messages to my body

That get forwarded to my brain and

Stored in the inbox of my heart.

My mind has you on re-dial,

You’re my fav’ number,

And the only one in ‘my circle.’

If I could, you would be permanently

Embedded into My space.

Don’t you see? You are the perfect

Background for my page,

And if you had ten profiles

They’d all be on my top list.

I want you to fill up my albums

With your face, all of these pictures

Of stilled moments frozen in time.

Frozen in happiness…

You are my reflection…

In a world full of lonely people…

I found you.

 

Author's Note

I started writing this one night after missing my boyfriend, I was starring at my phone and just started writing how I felt..I hope you enjoy it...

Reviews

[Que]

I always enjoy tech-savvy pieces. Some of my favorite songs (Reboot My Heart - The Cinnamon Fuzz & Hyperlink [Deep Down] - Effiel 65) are techno-loves. I'm definately adding this to that list even though it's a poem!

Thanks for posting this, it made my day.

~Que

[Drifter]

Rather enjoyable.It's always interesting to see how love can be mingled with the idea of technology, which has often been criticized for removing the "human" factor. (At least that's what I've heard from time to time). Anyway, good write!

[Thanh]

i enjoyed this alot.

[THE LOST ROSE]

Wow what would you write if you were missing him for weeks. This poem was wonderful and I hope you shared it with him. I know he melted. No man could resist the romancing of words from a woman that they love. I love this poem and you are not even mine. :-) Great poem please send me some more read request please.

[Raven Wilson]

:) cute I like the way its written, very original, to me at least.

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

i enjoyed reading this - very nicely done

[Asha Raphael]

i liked it :D well written!

[XxVampyrCandyXx]

I love the comparion to myspace. Im a bit of a myspace junkie myself. In either case it was a beautiful love poem and it flowed nicely with emotion. I love it. Made me smile.

[Amanda Avalon]

Wow.. what an original piece!

I love the idea that you've used modern technology as a backdrop for love in this piece.

My mind has you on re-dial,
You're my fav' number,
And the only one in 'my circle.'

My favorite lines... very cool! Quite excellent... thanks for the read request!

[Jason]

Nice great use of metaphors short sweet and honest good write.

"If I could, you would be permanently
Embedded into My space.
Don't you see? You are the perfect
Background for my page,
And if you had ten profiles
They'd all be on my top list.
I want you to fill up my albums
With your face, all of these pictures"

thanks