Ex-Like Behavior

Even though our time together has come and gone there is always something that pulls me back to you...

Ex-Like Behavior


I am unsure

That it is ex-like behavior

When you take me by the hand

And lead me to your bedroom

Where you embrace me tenderly

And hold me very close

Just like you use to�



It's very unlikely

Ex-like behavior when you

Brush your lips along my neck

Knowing that's my favorite spot.

I hate that my knees buckle

As I feel your tongue run up my neck�



It's definitely not

Ex-like behavior when

You slip all of my clothes off

And you begin touching me

In places that should be hidden

By polyester and cotton�



I start to cry

As I lay there in your arms, our naked

Bodies tangled up in twisted sheets.

You kiss the nape of my neck and I wonder

Why this ever had to become

Ex-like behavior�

Author's Note

I felt as if i was over my Ex but once i look into his eyes and feel his touch I forget why we ever broke up in the first place..He still has a piece of my heart so it is hard for me to just move on..maybe one day...

Reviews

[Dani California]

Wow, the emotion in this piece is very prevelant.
Difficult to get over someone with moments like this going on.... !

The title is brilliant, and the piece itself is extremely well done! It flows beautifully,
and its content brings up feelings of missing someone and then the bliss of a moment
of reunion.... old passion revisited.

Perhaps this person shouldn't be your ex? Just a thought.

Awesome work!

[Asha Raphael]

your words are full of emotions . . . it almost made me cry cause i know the feeling . . i really liked this one, good job!

[The Archangel Gabriel]

That's awesome. I used to have an ex like that, but I think that she is now marrired. And, I am glad for her. I wanted for her to be happy, and I was happy for the time that we spent together.

Luvya babe,
Gabe

[James Takeo Panton]

Dayum! Powerful and intimate..and all too truthful...

[Crystal Mullings]

Strong emotions something many of us can relate to

[These Haunted Hallways]

Very romantic, and kind of tragic at the same time. I love how u've expressed ur emotions in this piece. It is very, very beautiful. I know it is hard to move on. May take a while, but im sure it is for the better :)

B.A.

[wizthom]

to be trapped in the heartache of breakup ,only be lured back into the depths of that which you miss most,the loving feeling very good journey u took us on,,with this tender love song .i can relate as i often travel these roads,,peace wizthom

[she makes me weird]

This is an excellent write. "ex - like behavior". It almost makes me chuckle simply because your words have gone through my head so many times. I can completely relate. Great use of words to help the reader feel what you're feeling.