~Sweet Music~

Poetry is my Soul-Mate but Music is my first Love...

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Sweet Melodies of Music I Love You.
You make me travel through the flow of your beat.
Instruments playing send rhythm tic chills up my spine.
My body reacts to you Music...
I sway back and forth feeling your rhythm.
I'm rocked by your every note touching my skin.
You trap me in harmony and I'm stuck for a moment.
When I'm lost Music you find me...
When I'm sad you know exactly how to make me smile,
But you can be so deep that it makes my tears flow.
You bless me with strings and bass.
Sounds of brass and Keys enter my body and kiss my heart.
I nod my head up and down as you rattle my brain.
You make me think Music...
You tell me stories true and some false.
Fantasies and Paradises you engrave in my mind.
Making my wishful heart dream about you.
I can't imagine life without you Music...
You're my escape, you're my inspiration.
I would be so lost with out you Music...
I need you, you're as vital to me as the very food that I eat.
You feed my soul with your verses and chords.
You're my world and I beg you never to leave me

Sweet Melodies of Music I Love You...

Author's Note

I love music with all my heart..i listen to all types, but rap and R&B are my favorites..This is poem is just a lil someting to describe how music makes me feel..Poetry is my Soul-Mate but Music is my first Love..

Reviews

[Melanie Jane Boicourt S..]

"througho the flow of your beat. "
" send rhythm tic chills up my spine"
Just a few little typos that I caught.
I absolutelly love this piece.
Favorite line:
"Sounds of brass and Keys enter my body and kiss my heart. "

Where in the world did you get that picture.
It totally rocks and goes with the poetry so well.
Another brilliant piece from the mouth (or fingers I should say) of my new friend ~Word_Play_Poet~
Keep it coming and I will keep drinking them up.
Love All, Mejasha

[Heidi]

this poem speaks to me alot. i myself am a musician so music is a powerful thing. you capture that very well. amazing.

[Robert Luna]

I loved this because I can relate to it so well. Music is a hug part of my life I love it and listen to it all the time. I get inspiration from it to write or read and even draw. Music surrounds us all the time it is just a mater of stopping to hear it and the beautiful of it even in the silence that can be deafening. I love that picture you used as well I have used it for a piece before. I am going to include a poem I think you will enjoy of mine.

Its called Rave Days

A sea of bodies pressing into an ocean of dreams

Captivated by the tracing neon lights in a darkened room

Hypnotized by a collaboration of man and machine

Materializing baseline and beats



Losing a vanishing grip of an imaginary authenticity

Finding pure ecstasy in this chemical ecstasy

Tonight I stitch these eyes close

Tape this mouth shut



I don't want to know

Nothing but the sounds

Paralyzed in the enigmatic

Lucid truth of it all



Pounding rifts in my mind

As the D.J. spins it one more time

I continue to keep on Rollin

So I can feel utterly real



Becoming one with this

Room of living dead fools

Liberating myself to this

Symphony of lights and sounds



As my body breaks free

And I start to believe

This body in motion

Can not, will not be contained

[J. Hampton]

Music is....everywhere
mere replication of nature
the beat of life...even our heart beats a rythm that ends...
when the flesh does
( I think thats what draws us to it )

This felt so very candid and free form...
straight off the top of your spirit...

I like this...

"My body reacts to you Music...
I sway back and forth feeling your rhythm.
I'm rocked by your every note touching my skin.
You trap me in harmony and I'm stuck for a moment.
When I'm lost Music you find me... "

Blessssssssssssssssss

[Nana Carmine]

I love music too and I know the feeling. You express this so well and I really love it. Thank you for sharing this with us. Great job.

~Nana Carmine

[AK]

Yup... music indeed sustains the soul. I recently learned that King David decreed music would be played in the temple 24 hours per day. There were shifts a musicians that rotated in and out of that glorious place.

[Kevin Andros]

Music is a language that people all over the world understand. Be it country music, be it in any language, the whole wide world understands music and appreciates it. I have experienced that first hand as though I'm an Indian, I love listening to English, German and Japanese music. Music is truly my friend, the most wonderful creation. ~KA~

[NJ Schneider]

I love and adore music as well. It is a way of life and I feel so sorry for any person born deaf because they can not hear the absolute angelicness of music. Great write!

~Caine

[The Archangel Gabriel]

Great write! I love music, too. I am going through a minimalist phase with my reviews. :)

Luvandpeace,
Gabe

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Kind of describes me, seems like Music and Poetry are my life too, I would be lost without them.


Great Write.