~Sweet Music~

Poetry is my Soul-Mate but Music is my first Love...

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Sweet Melodies of Music I Love You.
You make me travel through the flow of your beat.
Instruments playing send rhythm tic chills up my spine.
My body reacts to you Music...
I sway back and forth feeling your rhythm.
I'm rocked by your every note touching my skin.
You trap me in harmony and I'm stuck for a moment.
When I'm lost Music you find me...
When I'm sad you know exactly how to make me smile,
But you can be so deep that it makes my tears flow.
You bless me with strings and bass.
Sounds of brass and Keys enter my body and kiss my heart.
I nod my head up and down as you rattle my brain.
You make me think Music...
You tell me stories true and some false.
Fantasies and Paradises you engrave in my mind.
Making my wishful heart dream about you.
I can't imagine life without you Music...
You're my escape, you're my inspiration.
I would be so lost with out you Music...
I need you, you're as vital to me as the very food that I eat.
You feed my soul with your verses and chords.
You're my world and I beg you never to leave me

Sweet Melodies of Music I Love You...

Author's Note

I love music with all my heart..i listen to all types, but rap and R&B are my favorites..This is poem is just a lil someting to describe how music makes me feel..Poetry is my Soul-Mate but Music is my first Love..

Reviews

[Melanie Jane Boicourt S..]

"througho the flow of your beat. "
" send rhythm tic chills up my spine"
Just a few little typos that I caught.
I absolutelly love this piece.
Favorite line:
"Sounds of brass and Keys enter my body and kiss my heart. "

Where in the world did you get that picture.
It totally rocks and goes with the poetry so well.
Another brilliant piece from the mouth (or fingers I should say) of my new friend ~Word_Play_Poet~
Keep it coming and I will keep drinking them up.
Love All, Mejasha

[Aradie Rain]

So true, with out music there is no life

[Shalini R]

i like the images you have
"You bless me with strings and bass.
Sounds of brass and Keys enter my body and kiss my heart. "

do you think theres anyway you could make it more... sing-song-y? maybe iambic pentameter, but keep a lot of hte same lines?

i think the poem should sound like music too, but this is a cool piece nonetheless.

[Brenda Sue]

The imagery is amazing. Beautifully penned. Great job.

[ah]

i would agree with everything u said, i love music also, i really have no idea what i would honestly do with myself if there were no such thing as music, that would suck lol.... thanx for asking me to read, it is a great write, keep it up

[REALIZE]

I felt this it makes me channel some of my favorite musicians and why I'm inspired to write or go about my life. So I know what you feel is real.

"You bless me with strings and bass.
Sounds of brass and Keys enter my body and kiss my heart.
I nod my head up and down as you rattle my brain.
You make me think Music..."


beautifully expressed,love.

[Yvonne Heidt]

Where would we be without music? I love it and like some - I "feel" it in my soul. Wonderful job on this - and judging from your reviews - they all agree!

[Phil Sanders]

Delightful imagery and your love of music shines through .. beautiful write .....

[Blue Bard]

There is a definite musical flow in your words that match your passion for the subject. You don't settle for the easy image, the trite and thus bring this poem to life.

[Amor-de-angel]

I too love music,not a day goes by without it, nice write.

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

i would have to agree with you... music is very important to me on a daily basis... in the car, at work... this is a great write...