~That Type of Love~

Its hard to describe Love itself..so the best way for me to describe my love for someone is to compare it to the things that I love..and sweets are definitely it...lol

~That Type Of Love~

You give me that sweet
Sugar coated, candy dipped
Irresistible type love…

That apple-cinnamon,
Peaches and whipped cream,
Strawberry flavored type love…

        Mmm you take my breath away
        When you give me that…

Baskin and Robbins
31 mouth-watering flavors
Of ice-cream type love...
         Or
That chocolate that melts
In your mouth,
But not in your hand type love…
          Baby
You give me that long-lasting
Taste-bud teasing, fresh flavored
Bubble gum chewing type love

          But my ultimate favorite 
          Is that…

Reese’s Pieces
Peanut butter, chocolate covered,
Lil’ piece of heaven type love…

          Baby that sweet type of love
          Is what you give me…
 

Author's Note

This was written for someone..started out as a joke but then I just kept writing and it turned into a poem..I hope you enjoy it as much as I do..

Reviews

[Miss Christine]

playful and fun to read out loud...like lyrics to a happy love song :)

suggestions (for what they're worth):

Remove or replace the words "But" and either "ultimate" or "favorite" from the lines: "But my ultimate favorite / Is that..." "But" interupts the delicious, smooth rhythm for me and using both "ultimate" and "favorite" is redundant (unless that was your intent, in which case, go for it!)

It really does capture that sweet newly-falling-in-love feel for me... :)

[Robert Luna]

Great job. I agree a 100% love is the hardest thing to write in a way to actually convey it with all the power of it. You did an amazing job making me feel an understand of what makes you happy as love does so often. I really liked this. You wrote this so perfect in a way that we are able to relate and understand where you are coming from and see how you compare it to that we can all see.

[Dez]

Aw! It's sweet . . . no pun intended. lol :) I thought it was a fun and playful read. You're right -- there really isn't a way to describe love, but we can have fun with metaphors all day long. :) Very inventive. I enjoyed it. :)