broken

i feel broken

used

no one seems to see what is really going on

the ones i really want to see

dont even look

do i need to wave it in front of their faces

for them to see

or is it truly not even worth

my time

Reviews

[Amanda Naomi]

these thoughts and feelings are sad, but to the owner of them, they can be poison. if the ones you want to see aren't going to see, don't want to look perhaps you deserve better people in your life.

sorry, didn't mean to do a spycological profile on you!

great poem, but i feel that this is only the begining to what could be a beautiful revolation! keep writing, take chances, and once in a while look back and see how far you've come in life, you might be surprised by what you find