Shattered

There are no colors

She sees no light

Only dark passions

Only black and white

As she seeks to find

The forbidden truth

She looks upon

A shattered youth

She knows the end

Is getting nearer

For she has looked

Into a shattered mirror

Reviews

[InkBlack]

It was short and to the point, which is good for many poems and it works here too.

The only problem I had with it is the fragments, perhaps you could consider combining some of the lines because it was kind of strange to me to read it like that.
You could do this....
As she seeks to find the forbidden truth
She looks upon a shattered youth
She knows the end is getting nearer
For she has looked into a shattered mirror

That however is a very nit-picky comment and if you want to keep the poem in its current format, that's okay, I'm just giving you a suggestion, you do not have to follow it.

Great work, welcome to WritersCafe and keep on writing!
Mil En Macabre

[Eagle Cruagh]

What a sad poem !

Very well written, a pleasure to read .

More, please.

---- Eagle Cruagh