She Said

She said 

Your eyes are like a thousand city lights 

When you shine 

It's so damn bright 

I just wonder what it's like 

I just want to feel your light 

She said 

Lately I'm so dark inside 

that sadness creeps into my eyes 

I wish that you were here tonight 

So I could know Just how damn bright 

feel your heat and touch your light 

Lately when the lights go out 

I've been thinking of your mouth 

Kiss me I'll get high on feeling 

Kiss me and I'll feed your demons

She said 

Your smile is like a thousand lights 

Like Christmas on the Fourth of July 

Im addicted and I want the high 

Free falling into your night sky 

Kiss me I'll get high on feeling 

Kiss me til you find the reasons 

Kiss me we'll create our dreams

Kiss me and I'll feed your demons 

-poetic angel 2016

Author's Note

My attempt at lyrics

Reviews

[roses]

The rhythm is spot on. I love how deep the lyrics are.

[Ashish]

From the very first line, my heart said "aww..how sweet!"
Keep writing, as a musician I can feel the essense of song and you are absolutely brilliant in writing lyrics...
Thanks for sharing :)

[Poetic Angel]

Thank you so much

[YanZeros]

Even by reading it the words gives off the tune! lovin' this lyrics Poetic Angel, wanting some more!

[Poetic Angel]

I really appreciate your continued support :) Thank you so much!

[YanZeros]

you're welcome! :)

[Xuru]

I need songs for my novel at some point, maybe we can collaborate on something?

P.S Is this your first attempt at writing lyrics?

[Poetic Angel]

PS this is my first attempt at writing lyrics..
Im feeling insecure about it, but I posted it anyways.
I'd love to collab with you, thank you (: