I Ache

I ache 

To climb inside behind your eyes 

I'm small enough 

To slip between the 

Prisms in your dilated pupils 

I'll step softly 

Around your hurricane 

Wrap my arms around 

Your insanity

And metaphorically 

Rock you 

Until you feel sane 

Until you feel safe 

-Poetic Angel

Reviews

[Hyacinth]

This is what poetry is about. The emotion and thoughts and feelings captured into these short, chilling verses. This is beautiful. Im lying in bed right now and pondering. Thank you.

[Poetic Angel]

I've been at some of the lowest points emotionally lately, and this type of feedback gives me reasons to try to believe I am any good as a writer, and maybe beyond that..
I cannot thank you enough for taking a moment to tell me that you enjoyed reading my words..

[Hyacinth]

Poetic Angel, I understand completely. I've actually nit had the best of times the last months either, and only tonight I convinced myself to post again there's no need to thank me, because what I say is the truth :)

[Hope]

This is absolutely beautiful.

[Poetic Angel]

Thank you so much

[Xuru]

I read your poem before going out for a smoke, yet I still found myself feeling it and thinking on it long past the crushed filter.

Well done, I look forward to more.

[Poetic Angel]

That was one of the best comments I've gotten in awhile on my writing.
Then again, as a writer I hold you in high regard.
So Thank you..

[Michael X]

wow, this vibes passion and poetic truths, the wording is really refined.

[Poetic Angel]

Thank you...