That I'll Never Take

I searched the image of your eyes

The ocean depth

Endless 

Written somewhere 

Were

Answers to my questions 

Like broken sea glass 

Reflecting  all the colors 

Of the moon , the sun , the stars

the spectrum 

Overwhelmed me

You were a thousand city lights 

Holding me tight

The sand from

A summer vacation 

I had never taken 

your skin against my fingertips 

Saltwater against my lips 

I searched for you

Until it hurt 

Conjured connection 

In the reflection 

the image of your  eyes 

Like  the way the stars align

captivated 

Like the ocean waves

 make love 

Endless to the shore

Ive always needed more.. 

I've prayed

Until I thought I'd break 

prayed until 

I became the ache

Prayed until 

I felt 

You 

Fade 

I prayed and still 

I became this way

Prayed and

You're still 

A million  miles away

Like that summer vacation 

I'll never take 

-Poetic Angel

Reviews

[Ashish]

Amazing writing :)
Perfect words, beautiful emotions though it was sad..

Keep writing :)

[Cattleya]

wow this was very amazing we need to here more

[Hyacinth]

This is love. A love lost,I think. And I want to feel this way for sk eine when I'm older. Im only 13, so I have probably no idea what it is like to be in love yet not be close to the person you're with. I think this is what it'll feel like. This is beautiful.

P.s- hope you aren't thinking I'm a crazy stalker! Your writing is just amazing!

[Poetic Angel]

I appreciate any feedback, regardless of age.
The man I write about is the most amazing and gifted writers Ive ever read. My love is pain, and he is all I know..
If you love someone someday, I wish it to have this endless depth, but not this pain..xx

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"You're still
A million miles away
Like that summer vacation
I'll never take"

Beautiful lines and beautiful theme!! I liked the emotions here ☺

[Poetic Angel]

Thank you for taking the time to respond, I appreciate it. Thank you so much..

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You are welcome! It was a pleasure ☺