All of You

I want you , all of you 

Even your nightmares  

The edge of your fears 

I want you , all of you ,

your blood sweat and tears 

Kiss me 

In the calm before the storm 

My heart is torn , and been here before 

What's wrong is right 

In black & white  

Tie the rope and make it tight 

Bind my wrists & black my eyes 

Write Sonnets of my suicide 

You're not broken 

The loneliness cuts like a knife 

If you leave me alone 

I could take my own life 

I want you to build it then break it apart 

These are the words bleeding inside my heart  

I wait for the end and I pray from the start 

Pledge allegiance to your darkest parts 

In your cemetery full of scars  

Infinite we are 

written in the moving stars 

We never did belong apart 

I am forever yours in my broken heart 

-Poetic Angel

Reviews

[Hope]

Wow..just wow. You are an amazing writer.

[Poetic Angel]

Thank you so much..

[OhSnapShley]

Wow, this was great. Thanks for sharing.

[Poetic Angel]

Thank you so much

[D.L. Thompson]

I really enjoyed this poem of yours. It is very well thought out and written. You have a very great rhythm happening with your rhyming here too, and it almost makes the poem sing songy for me, but in a good way. But what I liked most is how you captured your emotion and placed it so well on the page. It isn't just love, but the pain that comes from love. I enjoyed reading it.

[Poetic Angel]

Thank you so much

[YanZeros]

If only I could just click "like"
This passion will break the internet apart!

[Poetic Angel]

Thank you so much

[B]

Bravo !!!!
I totally could relate to this poem
Though i dont enjoy this form of intense love
but i often have found myself in one of that nature
not by design but by simple fateful placement

I guess i feel the urge in every single line

It must be the purest form of love
one that drives the calmest of people to insanity one too many times

thanks for sharing

[Poetic Angel]

Thank you so much!

[Brandon Wernke]

Another powerful poem. There's such sadness and devotion, the mixture is odd. But I like it. Very real.

[Poetic Angel]

Thank you so much

[AquaWater5674]

OMG...Poetic Angel..
For the first time since bieng on this site I am..
Speechless..
Let me reread your untitled poem again..
I want to really think about my review...
Passionate..beyond words...
Feelings alone don't describe it..
It is visceral gut wrenching...
And yet hopeful..
My oh my Poetic Angel you are just that..
This is so very true..
In more than just a sense of the word
Loving blindly...openly..unconditionally..
Is so painfully authentic at times..
Ahhh...I sing...
I got a girl crush...
When I feel betrayed..
By my man..
I know how you feel..I think..
Haven't sung that song lately tho
Because I have come to realize...it is what it is..
Kudos to You
Marvelous writing
Debbie

[Poetic Angel]

thank you so much ...