Thank You..

Softly she exhaled

'thank you'

into the icy New York wind

sent across oceans and continents

glacial divide

His eyes like ancient landslides

silent storms

rising tides

like sacred temples

perfectly aligned

for a moment 

breathless

the aura of light to her darkness

-Poetic Angel 2016

Reviews

[FIN]

In a few lines:

Powerful emotion.
Vivid imagery.
A soft touch.

A safe haven for this beautiful woman's heart, she has found, tonight.

"Thank you," Angel.

[Poetic Angel]

Rarely there is a connection possible through words, that brings a sense of unity between two people. I am happy we've found something like that within our writing..

[FIN]

As am I, Ms. Angel. As am I.

[Pete]

Powerful, seductive and mysterious - dangerous combinations. "His eyes like ancient landslides ... like sacred temples". Most excellent imagery. Nice job.