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Reviews

[Jordan]

Oh man, I can relate to this on an intense level... Especially the paradoxical idea that just being in a relationship would be enough to learn how to be better at relationships. *Sighs*. On the bright side, you managed to capture this complex emotional state very concisely, and I think a lot of people will really relate!

[PoeticSorcery]

thanks friend, glad my message was interpreted well, and was enjoyable.

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the flow of thoughts and the need/want in the words. A soulmate come one time in a long life. Need to find someone with similar ideas and hope. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[PoeticSorcery]

thanks friend, always appreciate it.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Tsunade]

It will find you. Just wait :)

[PoeticSorcery]

sometimes wait is all one can do lol

[Tsunade]

Same road with me.

[PoeticSorcery]

it gets rather depressing doesn't it? can't force it to find you though, apparently you need patience, which I'm running short of lol.

[Tsunade]

:( It bothers more to find a temporary than a permanent one. Stay patient! :D

[Dr. YumnaKay]

This is such a heart-touching and sweet composition. Finding love is difficult but keeping possession even more so. Great read☺

[PoeticSorcery]

thank you very much

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You are welcome ☺

[Giulia King]

Wow I really like this poem! Well written. I really hope you find someone :) they're gonna be lucky to have such a great writer as their boyfriend :)

[PoeticSorcery]

I hope so, definitely that they wouldn't get bored of me constantly writing about them lol.

[ReedWrite]

What a great poem you've penned. There is a bit of tongue-in-cheek here, I think...a little humor and self-deprecation going on, and yet beneath and behind the words, a heartfelt plea, as well. It's funny, poignant, and catchy, all at the same time. Great poem. Thank you for sharing.

[PoeticSorcery]

I appreciate that. I'm glad I was able to convey so many feelings, even if I myself didn't realize it lol. thanks for the review.

[Rebecca Garber]

I really enjoyed this poem it makes me think of very many people that i know. I don't know if this is a true poem on how you actually feel, but i can tell you that you will be able to i promise. It might not be fast it might not be easy but you will be able to do. I promise. I wish you luck. Please keep on writing i really enjoyed it. It is very personal.

[PoeticSorcery]

it's all real, writing poems based on real emotions is my specialty lol, and I hope I find someone, someday, I'm just stuck right now, and have to keep a stiff upper lip to bare through it.

[Rebecca Garber]

I promise you that you will make it don't worry.