The Depressing Side Of Life

Unsure about this one; could it be two poems in one? This one also was written when I was feeling down, and very very sad

Sometimes when people run they really want to hide

Not from anybody else but the way they feel inside

They pray for help with mistakes they've made

Just holding on to hope that someday they'll be okay

 

When something goes wrong it feels like the end

No one cares, and it's just lies they tell

I know right now that if I fall

There'd be no one to catch me

But that's okay I always tell myself

Someday I'll have all that I've ever dreamed of

 

Don't know when but it's not today

I just know someday I'll be okay

My life gets hard I must admit

But then, I've never really lived it yet

 

If i died it wouldn't hurt anybody

Might inconvenience a lot of people

Who don't give a s**t about me anyway

They've seen me crying but don't stop to help me

Reviews

[Christina]

very nice poem. it seems like it's two poems into one, but they both fit together nicely.

i can relate to what you're saying when the poem says
"If I died it wouldn't hurt anybody
Might inconvenience a lot of people
Who don't give a s**t about me anyway
They've seen me crying but don't stop to help me"
i thought exactly like that up until recently.
but anyway,
very nice poem. i really liked it. :D