Resigning Perserverance

A very profound poem Tell me if it makes sense to you

If you look for the ugly, you'll eventually find it,

But it's trying to forget, so please don't remind it.

Let it move forward, please don't rewind it;

It's trying to be free, so please do not bind it!

 

I've got a new word, but I can't seem to rhyme it.

I broke a world record, but nobody timed it.

I made the perfect piece, but haven;t aligned it.

So the petition I made, nobody signed it!

 

Ideas coming, ideas leaving-

The truth has been told, but no one's believing.

Deception has left, but its still deceiving.

Goals have been reached, but they're still achieving.

 

Anchored down, bottoms up, 

Options once open, now they are shut.

Control has been lost, emotions erupt,

Ideals once held true, now are corrupt.

 

Happines sways with its belligerent ways.

Forever puzzled, trapped in a maze,

Resoused losing outcounted by days,

Yet nobdy answers the questions I raise.

 

Issues are suffering, trapped in denial,

Illusions are mocking copying its style.

Trying to stay happy, but cannot smile

All this hardwork is it worth while?    

Author's Note

Tell me if it makes sense to you

Reviews

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

OH YEAH IT MAKES A WORLD OF SENSE! GREAT JOB!

[Lia]

Yes, it does make sense! This is a great poem. I like the rhythm and it has a fun element to it. Keep it up!

[Poetic Beauty]

This poem does make sense and it speaks loud and clear to the reader. You have done a great job conveying your thoughts and feelings in this piece.

[Laureeann]

This makes perfect sense! I love it!! I love how you wrote it, it flows so easily.