Resigning Perserverance

A very profound poem Tell me if it makes sense to you

If you look for the ugly, you'll eventually find it,

But it's trying to forget, so please don't remind it.

Let it move forward, please don't rewind it;

It's trying to be free, so please do not bind it!

 

I've got a new word, but I can't seem to rhyme it.

I broke a world record, but nobody timed it.

I made the perfect piece, but haven;t aligned it.

So the petition I made, nobody signed it!

 

Ideas coming, ideas leaving-

The truth has been told, but no one's believing.

Deception has left, but its still deceiving.

Goals have been reached, but they're still achieving.

 

Anchored down, bottoms up, 

Options once open, now they are shut.

Control has been lost, emotions erupt,

Ideals once held true, now are corrupt.

 

Happines sways with its belligerent ways.

Forever puzzled, trapped in a maze,

Resoused losing outcounted by days,

Yet nobdy answers the questions I raise.

 

Issues are suffering, trapped in denial,

Illusions are mocking copying its style.

Trying to stay happy, but cannot smile

All this hardwork is it worth while?    

Author's Note

Tell me if it makes sense to you

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The hard work in a life make us stronger and wiser. Easy things leave us wanting more. Anything worthwhile we must fight to keep. A excellent poem. Made me think.
Coyote

[Amanda]

This was an absolute joy to read. Entertaining through-and-through, wonderful rhyming scheme.

[Eternal.Dreamer]

Wonderful poem and it makes a lot of sense.

[McGee]

i hope you don't mind me adding this to my facebook notes

[McGee]

I love this. I'm adding it to my favorites :)

[luciddreamer]

Absolute sense, very nice flow...lyrical like....good job :)

[kij143]

OMIGOSH. that was awesome! I absolutely loved it! everytime I think Iv'e picked a favorite of your poems, you write a new one. That was so amazing, It flows wonderfully, and was simply and utterly, clever! So witty and poetic. WOW. I love your work.(:

[Goodbye]

This is the best I've read to date - the poet REALLY came out to play on this one, and it flows nicely.

And trust me, all the hard work in the journey of the soul and relationship to a higher power is always, always worth it.

[Tina Kline]

Well, to me your poem is saying the chaos and confusion of life/living is is on going and its pretty hard to figure out life and if what we're doing is really worth it because it doesn't really make sense at all!

[StacyPerry]

A deeper written piece. Very nicely written and it takes on a few meanings.