Illusions of Life

A powerful poem

A language without emotion is not a language at all

Just as pointless as the sounds and the syllables they fall!

Searching and searching, but i have not found 

A meaning to life in which my senses surround.

Concept after concept possibilities never end

Reaching the limit but the limit will bend

Never stop learning, never stop living 

God takes care of those who are caring and giving!

Willing to exceed but failing to execute

Shocking the system, lightning electrocute.

Illusions of life, leaving you destitute 

Illusions they are so let them not get the best of you!  

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Enjoyed your work..Very descriptive and expressive...I am glad that I chose this one to read today...May your gift expand and touch on the lives of many in the years to come in a positive way..Sunflower

[nono]

Very nice, I like it. Tells a lot. And keeps going strong. I'd say life IS an Illusions, and we're just it's toys in the play pin. Keep up the nice work! It takes a lot when a writer can make the reader feel what they want them to. Can't wait to read more of your writing!

[just is]

This is remarkable, I like this write. Very emotional

[Coyote Poetry]

"Never stop learning, never stop living
God takes care of those who are caring and giving!"
Those words above are what all people need to live by. I believe a person will stand before their God. He will ask what good have you done? I like this poem. When you live for what the world wants? You may end up in the wrong place. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Poetic Beauty]

Illusions of Life is a great title. Life is complicated, confusing and painful at its worst but it is loving, adventurous, and plentiful at its best. I love how you show different questions we have about life and what we are suppose to do. We are always asking ourselves questions about what we should or shouldn't do. This poem clearly shows this.

[Sweets]

This is the best poem of yours :)
Short and amazing! :D
Great job on this ! :D