Illusions of Life

A powerful poem

A language without emotion is not a language at all

Just as pointless as the sounds and the syllables they fall!

Searching and searching, but i have not found 

A meaning to life in which my senses surround.

Concept after concept possibilities never end

Reaching the limit but the limit will bend

Never stop learning, never stop living 

God takes care of those who are caring and giving!

Willing to exceed but failing to execute

Shocking the system, lightning electrocute.

Illusions of life, leaving you destitute 

Illusions they are so let them not get the best of you!  

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Taru Jain]

simply loved it!!!! It's so realistic. :)

[Goodbye]

I like the meaning and message, but I would go over it a little more to perhaps choose other words that make it flow a little better.

You do have lovely ideas, and I can see after reviewing a lot of your pieces where you stretch yourself and are maturing. Keep writing!

[Dream Weaver]

Loved the rhyming scheme here.
Pondering imagery outstanding...

[Poetic Beauty]

Great write here. We should be the lightening that electrocutes ideas in this world. Those who are different or are strong enough to stand out will give the world new innovations. Many inventors in the past were seen as crazy yet when their inventions worked people's ideas changed.

[StacyPerry]

This write was something that brought my mind to a few subjects, but I am not sure which one would be apt to mention as my "final thought" on what this is about [my guess anyhow].

Powerful and thought provoking.

[Light]

i like the concept of this poem alot!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

YOU HAVE A WAY WITH WORDS! LIFE IS AN ILLUSION!! YOU SAID IT! GREAT POEM!1

[Amanda]

This was an enjoyable poem. It pretty much sums up the difficulty involved in answering that one essential, unansweable quetion: "What is it really all about?"

[kij143]

Really good! not my favorite of yours, but still remarkable. You made the last two lines work really well, even though they dont ryhme dorectly. Nice job, keep it up(:

[Laureeann]

I like it, it's very relatable and kinda optamistic...