Favorite

This is to a young lady who has had my heart since the beginning but she may not know it.

I wrote a note to you my dear.
It sits within a bottle here,
Beside my bed next to my head,
Will it soon by you, be read?

I wrote it for you and you alone,
Will you be the one to decode,
the hidden message behind the lines?
See the truth behind my eyes,
And take away the pain inside?

I write you notes and leave them places,
hidden spaces, where they wait inside their stasis.
Maybe one day to be caressed,
Read with joyful tears, make up a mess.
The path is wide, we could walk abreast.

But until that day that you discover,
there is also joy in life with another,
I will wait so patiently. 
With notes and love in hand,
My favorite you will forever be. 

Reviews

[Shadows Ember]

I really like this. My only suggestion is in some lines you capitalize the remaining part of that stanza, and in others you do not. Other than that, it is very well written and formatted perfectly