I Need Like...

I.

i need a man with intelligence

enough to understand

     the idiosyncrasies of an early

morning wake-up f**k

who has the skills of a pornstar

     yet knows how far is

enough - i need the security

of his daily touch

     to know that he's not too distant

to pay attention or call home

-keeps me company-to talk alone

     to need me / as much

as life needs to breathe...

a man to love & share

     what lies

beneathe...

 

II.

i need

love like a sword needs its sheath & shield;

     as well as the rhythm of

my bowlderized heart

beats to the orchestration

     with trust and sincerity

in B-Sharp...

 

My c**k, in it's swollen purple

pulsing, yearns

     to feel your lips'

emulsion, the warmth

of your slick, sliding gifts

     to fall in the folds

with ecstacy

with bass-filled intensity

 

completely satiate

like soprano highs

     tremulous tenor / eleven miles

to heaven, untainted -this,

chemistry of our

     composition of a kiss...

I need love like addiction

needs it's bliss...

Reviews

[KWP]

i like it - I like the use of metaphors :)

open dialogue stating it as it is ... ahhh if only it is that easy ... this could make for the perfect online dating ad to attract the perfect muse (no saying it's tacky - no no far from it - but I imagine you could possibly come close to what you are aiming for_

love X

[Collette]

THIS was saucy, and I throughly enjoyed every second of it. Sultry, demanding, you sure know what you want, and you're not afraid of it. Your imagery was flawless, and I loved the parallel between you needed love and musical terms. Beautiful lay-out, solid flow. This piece is gold, and there isn't a thing I would do to change it. It is perfect as is, and I am looking forward to reading more of your work!!!
These lines were by far my favorite:

who has the skills of a pornstar

yet knows how far is

enough - i need the security

of his daily touch

to know that he's not too distant

to pay attention or call home

-keeps me company-to talk alone

ugh, they just pulled me in and I couldn't get enough. AMEN sister, AMEN. I agree with you wholeheartedly.