Fireworks (senryu)

Fireworks (senryu)

A Poem by Butch Decatoria

Toast to the heavens!
Chrysanthemums igniting
The night's cobalt sky.

(The New Years night sky...)

© 2017 Butch Decatoria


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puts me head up and watching all over again ...for a very small town we had some pretty good stuff go off.. i am no one to say but i think this may be more a haiku than senryu as it references nature .. i love the chrysanthemums description .. couldn't be better .. i can hear the pop bangs going off too
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Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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puts me head up and watching all over again ...for a very small town we had some pretty good stuff go off.. i am no one to say but i think this may be more a haiku than senryu as it references nature .. i love the chrysanthemums description .. couldn't be better .. i can hear the pop bangs going off too
E.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Butch Decatoria
Butch Decatoria

Las Vegas, NV



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