Bon Voyage (Senryu)

Bon Voyage (Senryu)

A Poem by Butch Decatoria



Like wide sails that cup
The high winds of this marriage,
I'm at love's mercy...

© 2016 Butch Decatoria


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passion and hearts can run amok ...no doubt about it .. but if the mainsail and mast are held firm ...one can weather the storms eh!? :) i especially like analogy of sail to cup ..very original and elaborately descriptive ..
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Posted 8 Years Ago



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Butch Decatoria
Butch Decatoria

Las Vegas, NV



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