Chivalry & Honor (Senryu)

HONOR

Keep your word fearless
And build a life strong with Truth.
A man lives to prove.


CHIVALRY

The selfless, kind, road
Warrior of deeper hearts
Pursues (his) golden worth.




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Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

i like the way you have it "a man lives to prove" ..i like this form of poetry very much .. i think these two are nuggets to take to heart ... second line in Honor has 6 syllables .. you probably know it .. and if i have read correctly the syllable count in both senryu and haiku has moved from tradition a long time ago to allow more freedom .. and i think you actually might not need the "(his)" at all ... both of these i can send my two sons (even tho they are grown) your messages are ageless and timeless :)
E.