MY HERO (sonnet)

Inspired by s. Khalil's with the same title. Thank u Sami.

Thine eyes were first, earth angel mine
To arrest the breath from within my lungs
Lovely and Deep blue pools, I drown in kind
But naught a drop from heaven flung

Afterwards in reprieve to calm my wits
That your flawless face should dawn
And as tho' a corpse that escaped its crypt
Your beauty dearest, resurrects dead songs

Where in my bones had lingered none.
Oh how I should sing of heavens proved
Having myself been saved yet undone
For thou art gravity of the stars and moon...

My savior, delicate and fine, divinely saves
Since my life has been touch by your grace today.

Reviews

[B.J]

Beautiful flow , I sit hear reading and I can feel the heaven open up and your words flow life a dream.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you for the credit and your inspiration to us all for you possess the talent and thirst for great art and work. This sonnet has gorgeous wording, flow and sentiments. Romantic and spiritual at the same time. You have resurrected beauty and injected faith in the eternal love. Excellent, sir....:)))

[Butch Decatoria]

Well that all you wrote seems like overkill, I'm humbled by it, and appreciate the kind review, but I'm just a simpleton on the search for the beloved...thank very much, you still are miles ahead of my dribble. Peace.

[Sami Khalil]

Peace and love. You are welcome. ...:))))