Love is a Speakeasy (#2) (Loop)

Deep down
Down the steps
Step into the underground club
Club of jazz greats
Great Gatsby happens nightly
Nightly partake in raucous debauchery
Debaucheries of heathen heat
Heat exuding from the beat
Beat of drum and bass of hearts
Hearts of lovers in the dark
Dark corners hidden
Hidden from all eyes
Eyes who spy their kiss
Kiss of true love's wish
Wish made on fallen stars
Stars that bedazzle and awe
Awe and wonder romancing the night
Night that finds two in love
Love in / is / a speakeasy
Speak easy with love....

(Deep down
Where great Gatsby happens)

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"Hidden from all eyes
Eyes who spy their kiss
Kiss of true love's wish
Wish made on fallen stars"

Night life, big city gangs, love on the rocks, light dazzling, dancers and clubs. You have shared a marvelous one...:)/////////////

[Butch Decatoria]

Thanks sir. And your sonnet has inspired me to attempt it. Not anywhere near as good as you, but tell me what u think of it.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly. .....:))))