MAHAL (Senryu Haiku)

He builds a palace
a monument of his vow
to love only her.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

you inspire my imagination ...would never think to build a palace for my love ... if i remember accurately ..it was hard enough to get the words out ;}
"Mahal" gives me fine thoughts for the day ..to work on the "palace" of love inside .. and give it to my Norma :))
E.

[Butch Decatoria]

Its an ode to the Taj Mahal...

[Einstein Noodle]

well.... Shah Jahan had it built for his favorite dead wife .. an incredible journey in itself ...thousands of elephants and workers ..its mostly marble and jade right!? ... but i will take my palace for Norma any day! ;) it is a fine tribute sir ... peace and joy

[Butch Decatoria]

Peace and Joy, back at ya... you've put a smile on my face, quite an intellectual you are sir. Thank you for kind support.