HOT TIN ROOF (Senryu Haiku)

A light Summer's breeze
cools our cacophonous bodies,
like hot stars at night.

Reviews

[Papaya]

Really like how you've used the word cacophonous here. Conjures up some images.

[Butch Decatoria]

Thank you.

(On a different note : did you know that the sun, and other stars in outer space, actually make noise --some sounds inaudible to human ears-- but they do sing... just thought to mention that. Thanks again for reading and commenting, much appreciated.)

[Papaya]

I did not know this, that is brilliant. thank you.