BLUE FIRE (Rewrite)

As hot as...
those eyes when he sees
almost predatory

always do they genuflect
upon their roughened knees  
a sordid kind of scene

obscene / unsanitary
craven cries to Loki
for pleasures
sleazy writhing /
feeding fists

sweat of the easy / a quickened fix
men with members stiff as petrified
sticks / jabbing in a hastened mix
teeming muscles / hungry hips

like electrified evenings of swollen eels
sustained by suckling Gamorra's tits
fiending always
for the slick and the harsh

crystalline mist / he is undoubtedly marked
by the unquenchable blue fire
of his lust / afflicted addictions,

never will he tire - incessantly
defined by sex's maledictions 

I grow hot like sunlight
bright - even in the darkest mires

he's an unmatched lover in satin flight,
a dragon / a well-endowed sire
formiddable in succulence / remiss of sight

i weep without regret when
once i followed him toward the night
forgot what i was and

accept what i am,
endure in all burning light
fueled by the sword of Pan

love keeps me warm
as he keeps me lit

i am reborn / magnificent
a forlorn phoenix
omniscient  
songs for his careful choir

i am one chosen - truth among liars,
i fly above / kite toward the sun
this is what I am / what i was

this is what i've become

then a willful puppet
without inhibiting wires

yet my love will never tire
transformed by lost desires / hot as blue fire

this is who I will become

i am the light of the rising sun.

The Lion of kingdom come...

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

ahhhhhhhhhhh the metamorphosis of a lusting man ...i am glad you give your poem a positive closing ...for i do believe lust to be destructive and the Light and the Lion truly victorious and fulfilling .. :)
E.

[Butch Decatoria]

Live and learn, I really was as much a victim in my naivete back then, but grew strongest at the end when it was my soul that was at stake. (Took me a bit to finally wake.) Thanks so much for reading and taking time to comment, much appreciated.

[Einstein Noodle]

:)................. Love you man!