ASPHODEL (Snowflakes) -Haiku

ARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE

Blue eyed googleler

surfer of webs' thieving Clouds:

Wi-Fi cyber sheep.

ASPHODEL (Snowflakes)

Gossamer's winter

caught in fractal panes, your sighs:

white breath as flowers.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

nice job! i like them equally ...one a piercing jab at those to trusting in our quite dangerous cyber world .. and the other simply beautiful .. the hardness of fractal against gossamer and sighs and breath is a nice chew;) but snowflakes they melt on the tongue don't they .. enjoyed reading this morning ..we are supposed to get a bunch tomorrow! ugh! been in snow country too long :)
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[Butch Decatoria]

Thank you for your eloquent review, much appreciated. I'm more of an tropical island kind of guy, although I'd love to go sled down a great big hill, or build a snow spongebob (a square block--not much design to it, simple and snow days!) gotta love it. Thanks again, peace...

[ANTO]

As a blue-eyed googler I was intrigued by the first haiku. It made me think about my use of the search engine but I often grabbed a dictionary as a kid when I encountered words I didnt know. To me google is the logical progression for an inquisitive mind - of course there will always be the kids who looked up -dick and p***y in the dictionaries back in the day. Google is their nirvana.

The second haiku was as delicate as a snowdrop. Very beautiful.

[Butch Decatoria]

Thanks for reading & review. I use to look up a new word everyday in the dictionary, when I was just starting school, learning English, determined to assimilate and be as American with my English. I got most of the first couple of pages, Letter A, some B words, and D words... Now its a matter of finding something worthwhile to read, when words are play things to those who would keep truth hidden - by omission or dismissive elocution... And we cant give those lies power by believing it, so you know, be as blatant as your poetry, you are the word that you keep... what's a good word?

Thanks again Peace...