Renewal's Glee (3 Haiku)

3 Haiku - Happy Spring Break, all of you...

RENEWAL'S GLEE

Cherry blossom clowns

winsome pink dandruff laughter

Floral snow of Spring

FLASHFLOOD

Liquid season's rage

Mountains weeping river/sky

desert veins quicken...

ARTIFICIAL DREAMER

Blue eyed stargazer

surfing heights without your cloud

Wi-Fi cyber sleep.

Reviews

[~]

aha! spring break surfing here i come!!! :) I liked each of them. Distinct in tone and rich in description.
I love cherry blossoms, why don't you put 'crown' instead? they are my favorite!! :):)

[Butch Decatoria]

I wanted to create an image of laughing clowns, as they lose their locks, afloat midair... and still it is a happy note, joy of spring (although hair loss is normally unwanted)...

[~]

may I ask why do you think they look like clowns?

[~]

just trying to understand your imagery :)

[Butch Decatoria]

curly wigs. guess I intermingled laughter and happy with clowns and pinkish white flora --incorrectly. Anyhow, happy spring time to you, and I will marinate about this.
How can I create that child like wonder and joy into an image and frame it with words oozing with sensation or feeling... the dilemma of painting bright emotions... ain't it grand.

[~]

:) I do see your intent. I guess for each person there is a different emotion attached to any word. Keep up your good work my friend!

[Ed Hart]

oooh...so good, so good, so good...

[Butch Decatoria]

Thank you for stopping by. I did not much care for the new pieces you wrote, otherwise I would of posted bits o' compliments. They just were ok, lack luster of that poetic oomph! you usually have, but good as good is without stating any bad. Anyhoot, thanks again for stopping by.

[Ed Hart]

an honest soul, how rare...yes, lacking luster, old pieces resurrected to fill the absence of a muse hanging out with younger hearted poets, such as yourself...and that's true, your poetry grows, which is a reflection of larger growth...

[Butch Decatoria]

Thank you. Have a wonder and a day...

[Jamestown]

3 for1 deal, how much do we owe you?
Thanks for sharing such creative work
b-blessed!

[Butch Decatoria]

Thank you so much for your kind review. Same to you. Much appreciated.