Of Winter / Dusk / Dawn

Of Winter

Wonderlands in quilts

sewn in frost'd metonymy

war or love will melt.

Dusk

Between moonbeam dreams

and light to open the day

all shadows writhe blue DAWN So still the speed of light as everything wakes with you Life still and will rise.

© 2014 Butch Decatoria

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Matching Socks

War or love will melt... Love your thought process here. Nicely done. :) War or love will melt... Love your thought process here. Nicely done. :) Rating /100 Butch Decatoria 10 Years Ago Thank you Ana for your kind review.

kublakhan27

Being my favourite season and favourite time of the day, I was hooked to this piece right away...I'm always eager to read the interpretations of different poets on both states, and you've articulated them beautifully and uniquely...it takes a lot of skill to write in this form (I know cuz I struggle with it haha) and you've got it for sure...nicely done my friend. Being my favourite season and favourite time of the day, I was hooked to this piece right away...I'm always eager to read the interpretations of different poets on both states, and you've articulated them beautifully and uniquely...it takes a lot of skill to write in this form (I know cuz I struggle with it haha) and you've got it for sure...nicely done my friend. Rating /100 Butch Decatoria 10 Years Ago Thank you for your kind review.

Ed Hart

winter and dust work better for me, resting in the luxury of the sunset and palms winter and dust work better for me, resting in the luxury of the sunset and palms Rating /100

Reviews

[Matching Socks]

War or love will melt...

Love your thought process here. Nicely done. :)

[Butch Decatoria]

Thank you Ana for your kind review.

[kublakhan27]

Being my favourite season and favourite time of the day, I was hooked to this piece right away...I'm always eager to read the interpretations of different poets on both states, and you've articulated them beautifully and uniquely...it takes a lot of skill to write in this form (I know cuz I struggle with it haha) and you've got it for sure...nicely done my friend.

[Butch Decatoria]

Thank you for your kind review.

[Ed Hart]

winter and dust work better for me, resting in the luxury of the sunset and palms