Falling

Free write ...

Such golden brilliance
Sunset enflames
As I awe on my perch
Burning with its sinking rage

Melancholia
As anyone who has fallen
A victim of the beautiful ones
But mine eyes
Upon infinite ever afters

Starlight expressions

Worlds I would give
Love at first sight

Not having know I was blind

Been

Lost in the distance between
Indifference and

Falling...

In you I Awe...

Falling



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Reviews

[Frieda P]

Hardly much worse than 'indifference' especially when it comes to relationships, I really like the concept of falling 'up'....that's what sinking rage will do to a person.

[Butch Decatoria]

Did you get my note, my reviews? Was it truly written and inspired by me? Or am I just groping and wishful thinking? Let me know

[Frieda P]

Huh?........what are you talking about?

[Butch Decatoria]

I lost my marbles... Lol

[Frieda P]

Oh... sorry I don't get my alerts here that often...it was fluttered with a t....one letter makes all the difference. ;-) Lost my marbles long ago, it's all good haha

[Tina Louise UK]

Beautiful piece, really enjoyed :) x

[Butch Decatoria]

Thank you.