Enemy Mind, Listen.

Listen
Technicolored dream screen
Conditioned glob of a thing
Synchronicity / listen / closer
Our electric sanity
Apulse a puzzle
Abuzz in wondering
Explosive pain alight
Each breaking bone thundering
Razor-heat bullet hole
You are mind
Always aflight
Even in respites' malingering wight
Ghost
In living machinations
Of physical information
Wept
Even in plundering / times
It is difficult to hear you
In the dark vale / veil shrouds
Truth...
Listen to the pandering / crimes
Symptomatic cacophony
Like pixelatious chaos
Snow of black & white
Void of hi-def depth
Just a box of a skull / b**b tube / (blight)
Still flesh heavy
In the silt of reality's midnight
Conditioned for numb
To naught care / less aware
Chewing gum
As the wilderness from without
Floods
Cantankerous / gelatinous countries of grey
Matter / overwhelms mind
Rather than mind over
Thought to spontaneous
Flame
Create universe
In our vox cave
So listen closer now
Such multitudes of crave
Life / ride focus to rife / clarity
Imagination & knowledge
Obtuse / for its use / voraciously

I am you
And you are I
I am the fire
Magic in the eye
If we are one
And one are we
Shed light in this space
Mountain / that is mine
Seeing is knowing
Stay true to thine
For you are mind
Technicolored wisdom now
Awake
No longer dead or blind
Listen / no word need spat
This is the beginning of all that
We are infinite
Music
I hear You at last...
Listen./

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A very interesting poem. I don't claim I understand the meanings but I like it though...Bravo

[Butch Decatoria]

Telling myself and who ever else feels like the enemy to just listen or rather in the mind THINK... And in the maelstrom feel the connection .. The simple truth we dismiss in warring, we are here together, we only harm ourselves with our own chaos s**t... Be mindful of your humanity, Luke Skywalker... Lol, did that make sense ? Sorry it took a while to respond, but had to ... Clarity ... It is difficult nowadays darkness...

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:).....................

[Ees]

All laid out before me! I like your language and the way that the words play and buzz as they land on the page (screen) before me. The poem, in some ways is chaotic, but I mean that in a way that it helps to portray the poem. It works with your writing and not against it.

fave lines:
" Conditioned for numb
To naught care / less aware
Chewing gum "

Listen!
Love the ending too.

really great work!!!