TWO HAIKUS

Wedding and Butterfly

WEDDING

 

As we are falling

hand in hand so grippingly

until death a kiss.

 

 

BUTTERFLY

 

A dangerous thing

inspiration's fragile wings,

metamorphoses.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

I like the wedding stanza the most ...Awesome...:)

[Butch Decatoria]

thanks Sami

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[Frieda P]

Ha love the wedding one...butterfly too. Nicely pen'd.

Did you mean 'metamorphosis' since it's a butterfly?

[Butch Decatoria]

metamorphose (with an S)...lol

[Stella Armour]

like these well written haiku, and they are well written...much enjoyed...