A True Friend

One of my first poetry writings from my heart.

I've seen your pain and all you went through
Thoughts passed my mind on what I can do for you
I knew I was more than an ordinary person in your life
Above all else I'll stay loyal to you all the way to the end
Keep me as a perfect companion above all that happens
When everyone leaves you out, know I'm the one that really cares for you
That worries for you, that wants to help you up.
Just know me as one of the only true you ever really had in your life

Author's Note

I actually feel like I can improve this to make it look more better, I just made this in like 10 minutes.

Reviews

[macourt]

This is a heartfelt poem you can feel your emotion as you read it. Maybe shorten one or two of the long sentences so that the reading flows easier.

Otherwise, it is a lovely poem filled with compassion. Nice work for only 10 minutes.

[Marc Damian]

Thank you very much. As a young poet I try to write with emotion from my heart on topics that I love. I had good feedback on this and you are right about shortening some of the lines I thought about that one too. Thank you.

[macourt]

You are very welcome..Keep on writing those lovely poems. Have you ever thought of writing for greeting card companies?
Let me know and I can send you a few who are looking for meaningful prose.

[Marc Damian]

How would those things work? It depends on how much they want for a period of time.

[macourt]

You would submit our writing and if they like it they would pay you for it. I believe it is on your own time like selling articles. They pay per poem and it varies.

[Marc Damian]

Ok I would like to look more into that. Can you tell me who to contact?

[macourt]

Do you want me to send the link via this site or do you have a private e-mail? Let me know. The link will explain everything and also submission requirements.

[Marc Damian]

You can message me it here that will be convenient. Thanks.

[macourt]

I sent the link but don't see it??? Let me know that you have received it.
http://www.freedomwithwriting.com/freedom/uncategorized/13-greeting-card-companies-that-accept-submissions/

[Marc Damian]

Yep I see it thanks a lot.

[macourt]

You are welcome......Lots of luck

[Marc Damian]

Yep I'll see how it goes :)