"Life and Love"

"Life and Love" A poem by Night.2013 Posted On 09/23/2013 15:02:10 by Night

I gazed upon a neon night

and soon my thoughts did wander

Could the beauty of this night

be anything but splendor.

I slept upon a morning dew

and still my thoughts did wander

Could the beauty of this day

be anything but splendor.

I found myself in love with you

again my thoughts did wander

Could the beauty of your love

be anything but splendor.

I thought of life and all it means

of love and you and laughter

Because I'm loved within this life

I count it all as splendor.

Thank you and may God bless...Night.2013©

 

Author's Note

I'm still alive and well...lol.

Reviews

[paul sal.....]

Ahhh, to be in love, one of those things that makes life interesting; wandering what the neon sign said......

[Night]

It simply said....
Caution. ....life and love up ahead....SLOW DOWN. ....lol
Thanks for reading me.

[Time's The Bond]

Aww it's so touching and sweet

[Night]

Thank you very much...=)

[RichGee]

Simple yet inspirational. Nice

[Night]

Thank you my friend.

[Carolann Dowsett]

True love indeed can be beautiful splendor. A beautiful, soft and dreamy poem.

[Night]

Yes, dreamy is a good way to describe this write....thank you Carolann. =)

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is quite amazing. I love the rhythm in it.

[Night]

Thank you kindly...hope all is well with you...=)

[Brittany Zedalis]

could be better, could be worse. thanks :D

[Night]

...lol. Stay golden my friend....=)

[EileenMarie]

That was raw & simply beautiful!

[Night]

Thank you very much my friend....=)

[Sami Khalil]

An inspirational poem of love...Bravo..............

[Night]

Thank you my friend....love can be very powerful in our lives....=)

[Sami Khalil]

So true...You are welcome...:).............

[Dhaye]

Wow! This is so splendid.

My version:
I find myself in love with him
My thoughts do often wander
If the rain will just stay tonight
Then my joy won't stay forever
But if the rain will come back
Then that's when I'll call it splendor...

Thanks so much for this inspiring piece, Night. Your crafts are just so beautiful! Please keep on inspiring people with your works.

[Night]

Very nice ink indeed...I am flattered for sure....thank you my friend....and write I will...lol. =)

[Dhaye]

You're welcome.
Happy Holidays, Night!

[Night]

Happy Holidays to you my friend...=)

[KatDarkness]

"a neon night" " I love that image, excellent piece :D

[Night]

Thank you my friend...nice to see you. =)

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarri..]

Splendid!
It's a gift to see you back, David.
We missed you.

[Night]

Thank you my friend very much....I've missed you all as well...=)