"My Friend"

How precious the Woman so lovely her song

Her touch so gentle

 Loving and strong.

How special her love so healing and kind

With fierce resolve 

And presence of mind.

How loving her words they comfort my pain

like flower and sun

In love with the rain.

How beautiful the Woman so sweet and serene

Bright colors of love

In valleys of green.

This poem is for you, the Woman I see

Created by God

So beautiful to me.

So God bless the Woman, this prayer I send

Protect her and love her

This woman, my friend.

© Night.2013 

 

Reviews

[Phil Smith]

Wow! Great work!
I really liked this one, and the way the 'Woman' was presented; the fact that you capitalised her name was a great addition - much like 'God' might be.
The imagery here was really inspiring, using the old Romantic era techniques to compare this woman with the beauties of nature - very impressive.
I hope that this woman is a real person, and that you have the pleasure of knowing her, if so, you're a very lucky man :)

[Night]

Thank you for the kind review...and yep, she's real alright...=)

[A Little Piece of Me]

I absolutely love this, wow! Have you shared this magical piece with this special woman? I bet it'd melt her heart. You've done an amazing job of expressing yourself here and sharing the beauty of love.

[Night]

...thank you so very much.

[Annabelle Lee]

how sweet.

[Night]

Thank you Annabelle...God bless you...=)

[BL]

Beautiful thoughts and sentiments that are appropriate to one and all women, quite a tribute

[Night]

Thank you very much...=)

[Salar Majak]

awwww this is so very cute!!!!! she is lucky :) God bless you both!!

[Night]

Thank you my friend...')

[Frieda P]

What a loving tribute to your friends that comfort's your pain, she must be a poetess, wonder who it could be. Just lovely. :-)

[Night]

...Thank you Frieda...=)

[Frieda P]

My pleasure, we'll talk later. ;-P

[Night]

...k

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

I feel the Love ... Beautiful .. touching ....


Love You .. Jasmine

[Night]

Thank you Jasmine...love you too...=)

[Holly Mason]

This is a beautiful write
what a sentiment hope you give this one to your Valentine
thank you for sharing

[Night]

Thank you Holly, God bless you...=)

[Scarlet Alice]

aawww... so sweet :) each line expresses sincere love. really well written. :) and thanks for sending read request ;)

[Night]

Thank you Scarlet very much...God bless you...=)

[Carolann Dowsett]

This is so beautiful, so soft and full of love and appreciation for your friend. A beautifully flowing write that has depth and emotion.

[Night]

Thank you so much...after all, she is a very special girl...full of love and light...=)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Well she is Blessed to have you as a friend I'm sure :)

[Night]

...thank you...=)

[Emerald Seas]

A tender dedication to a dear friend. What a wonderful sentiment to express! Friendship is such a vital role to our presence and fulfillment. You've expressed yourself very well in this writing of her, and of yourself for acknowledging that deep connection. Well written!

[Night]

Thank you my friend...=)