"My Friend"

How precious the Woman so lovely her song

Her touch so gentle

 Loving and strong.

How special her love so healing and kind

With fierce resolve 

And presence of mind.

How loving her words they comfort my pain

like flower and sun

In love with the rain.

How beautiful the Woman so sweet and serene

Bright colors of love

In valleys of green.

This poem is for you, the Woman I see

Created by God

So beautiful to me.

So God bless the Woman, this prayer I send

Protect her and love her

This woman, my friend.

© Night.2013 

 

Reviews

[Phil Smith]

Wow! Great work!
I really liked this one, and the way the 'Woman' was presented; the fact that you capitalised her name was a great addition - much like 'God' might be.
The imagery here was really inspiring, using the old Romantic era techniques to compare this woman with the beauties of nature - very impressive.
I hope that this woman is a real person, and that you have the pleasure of knowing her, if so, you're a very lucky man :)

[Night]

Thank you for the kind review...and yep, she's real alright...=)

[Dhaye]

This is soooo beautiful, Night.
What a coincidence, the photo you used here was the one I used in one of my compositions (song) which I also posted here. So I can relate with the first verse so much, as if a friend of mine is telling those lines. lol

My fave verse is:
"How loving her words
they comfort my pain
like flower and sun
In love with the rain." ....because I love rain, too.

So lucky you are having that woman in your life as a friend. All of us are searching for someone whom we can rely on specially when we are down. I can see that the two of you can depend on each other. I love to hear beautiful stories of friendship like yours.

This is an amazing poem for me. I love the concept, the choice of words, rhythm and the rhyme scheme. Excellent!

[Night]

A tribute to Gods most beautiful creatuion...The Woman. Thank you my friend for your review and kind words.......=)

[Dhaye]

You're welcome.

[Cassie]

Wow!!!! God bless her indeed.Very excellently worded.

[Night]

Thank you my dear...and God bless you...=)

[rnuff]

Such a wonderful, lovely write.

[Night]

...This one's for you too Shorty...=)

[KAOlmsted]

This is just lovely, David. I think I know for whom it was written, if it was written for somebody here in the cafe ;-) and I have a feeling she absolutely loved this. Thank you so much for sharing this profoundly beautiful piece with us.

[Night]

This was written as I reflected on the true beauty of "the woman", the beautiful woman that I see in all of you ladies here...the one's I call my friend...that's right kimmer...this ones about you too...=)

[KAOlmsted]

Awwww...now I'm all gushy! Thank you so much for that...

[Night]

...you're welcome my friend...=)

[Joanna Johnson]

Oh how romantic!!! That is so sweet.

[Night]

....awe, thank you Joanna...=)

[Asilem]

I'm so happy for you! I wish i had a guy who would do this foor me. Make sure she knows how you feel. One of the worst things is going through life without knowing true feelings.

[Night]

True that, and thank you so much...=)

[Asilem]

Welcome. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is quite a beautiful ode to your friend...she must be quite a lady.

jacob

[Night]

She certainly is my friend, she certainly is....thank you jacob...=)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

beautiful Night.....simply beautiful.

[Night]

Hi Neva, thank you my friend...=)

[LA Lorena]

A most lovely tribute to a special woman. I hope she appreciates your words and sentiments.

[Night]

Thank you Lorena...=)