"Within My Heart"

"Within my Heart" Posted On 08/24/2012 15:17:28

I thought a thought

within my heart

and it came to pass

one day.

And all the fear

and doubts I've had

began to melt

away.

I've dreamed a dream

within my heart

and in this dream

was you...

so now the blues

have gone away

and all things

seem brand new.

I loved a love

that made me sing

of smiles

made for two.

I thought a thought

within my heart

and in my heart

was you.

© Night.2013

Reviews

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is so romantic and sweet. Your poetry is always so good.

[Night]

Thank you kindly my friend...=)

[Dhaye]

I'm so hooked with your works, Sir Night. I'm glad I've found your page last night. =)
This is so beautiful and touching.

This one's my response to your piece:

I dreamed to make a poem like this
The one which I can say
The words were coming from my heart
Not just a dream away.

I dreamed to tell him through my works
The feelings I have kept
That in my dreams he's always there
My prize when I slept.

I dreamed to wake up from a dream
That beside me there he is
I longed to see his face with grin
I want him to be in his best...

I don't know why upon reading your piece, words are just like flowing freely and I have to catch them all. In just few minutes...well, I have that poem response.
Thanks for this inspiring piece. I think, being in your page, I won't be attacked by writer's block.

How come you are Night and I am Dhaye (Day)? Just joking, Sir. I salute your pieces here in your page.

[Night]

To write is to inspire, to create wonder, to heal, to take the reader to a place they have never been before....to write is to paint the words of a new world....=)

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarri..]

You're in a dreamy mood lately lol
Very nice

[Night]

lol....yep. Thank you...=)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Very beautiful and dreamy

[Night]

Awe, thank you very much...=)

[Purplerose]

Oh, how beautiful and tender. Love it!!! :)

[Night]

Thank you so much...=)

[Emerald Seas]

Beautiful reading!

[Night]

Thank you very much my friend, it's nice to see you...=)

[Yellow Butterfly]

You have captured everything magical about being in love in this beautiful poem.

This was wonderful to read... thank you for sharing

[Night]

Thank you very much...=)