"The Life That You Live"

The life that you live is the story that’s told

    From the day you were born till the day you grow old.

Why am I here? And what will I do?

The path that you take is all up to you.

   

When I was a child I played childish games          

Now that I’m older every things changed

When I look out my window at the falling rain   

I think of my life, the sorrow and pain'

When I close my eyes, I hear my breath                

I think of life and I think of death.

When I open my eyes, I see His light

And then I remember I’m saved by Christ.

           

Even in death you’re never alone

For surely He’ll come and take you home.

So please remember these words that I write   

For even in death, will you find life.

               

Night.2005

Reviews

[AYVID N]

Indeed He is the resurrection and the life and those who believe in Him shall never die. So the burdens we carry get lighter and death looses it's sting when we walk with Christ.

Thank you for the poem full of hope and faith in Christ. Reminds me He is everywhere. 100/100

[Night]

...you're very welcome....:)

[Be myself!]

Good Job

[Night]

thanks.:)

[Be myself!]

Your welcome

[Carolann Dowsett]

Absolutely beautiful, an awesome message of hope. Yes in death there is life through Christ Jesus.

[Night]

thank you very much.:)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I absolutely love your message, and the flow of this piece. I truly believe that optimism and faith is what changes your life in any situation. This is Beautifully written!

[Night]

...thank you so much Robbie...God bless.:)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

My pleasure...it is indeed an inspiration to read....Thank you. :)

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarri..]

yet another wonderful sensational epic, Night
its so suave and enlightening

[Night]

thank you very much kind sir...:)

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

thank you for writing

[KAOlmsted]

Nice. Your faith is inspirational, even to a tired old cynic like me ;-) Thanks for sharing this with us, David.

[Night]

you are very welcome...:)

[Ambereen]

I love your poems they are full of hope and faith . They make me feel all charged up and positive . Beautifully penned .

[Night]

Thank you my friend...:)

[Asilem]

Another great, my friend.

[Night]

Thank you kindly...:)

[Emerald Seas]

Lovely write! I think some people still have a hard time forgiving themselves of their past even when they know God does. People do crazy stuff, it's called life. Live, learn, and move on. Nice rhythm and rhyme to this piece as well.

[Night]

...thank you.:)

[Salar Majak]

wow, this is so deep, and deeply written too, the beauty of this poem is devine, it tells a story everyone can relate to and that is where it's beauty lays. great write.

[Night]

...you treat me with kindness and respect...I thank you with all my heart...:)

[Salar Majak]

:) you deserve that, you are welcome my friend