"Loves Desire"

"Loves Desire"

A Poem by Night
"

...Inspired by a lovely friend of mine...Carolann.

"
More Joy in The Lord...Amen...!

I saw the vision clearly
it stayed with me awhile

 Though my soul was weary
I found myself with smile.

It seemed but just a dream
This vision from afar

And in my heart was seen
The brightness of a star.

 Like the stars that shine
Forever gems of fire

So in this heart I find
A light of loves desire.

Night.2013

© 2013 Night


Author's Note

Night
...inspired by and written for a very beautiful and talented woman, my lovely friend Carolann. Without her light this world would be a darker place...Night.2013

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How is anyone supposed to concentrate with that photo up there is what I want to know?! mmmm, anyway, I thought your last poem I read of yours was for her, thanks for setting me straight. ;-)

Very sweet, compassionate and strong, much like yourself David.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Night

11 Years Ago

...lol. You're such a nut...:)
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I can deal with that, been called worse. :-D
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This is so sweet! I love your tattoo collection by the way.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Night

11 Years Ago

...lol. Thanks.
Sweet .. maybe a few words missing .. but it doesn't take away from the theme ..

Love-ly .. Jazz x :)..................>>

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Night

11 Years Ago

yeah, I tend to write in shorthand allot...lol. Thanks Jazz.:)
J. J.  Nightingale

11 Years Ago

Slow down David .. I do the same ... .. I am my worse critic !! .. Love You !!
awe this is a wonderful sweet write.
simply amazing : )

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Night

11 Years Ago

...thank you so much...:)

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Added on January 21, 2013
Last Updated on January 26, 2013
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