"My Friend"

"My Friend"

A Poem by Night

Heaven : Beautiful ray of sunlight through the cloud in the ocean


Father forgive me for I have sinned...

please help me keep what's good within.


Father I come to you in a prayer of thanksgiving...

I know that you're with me in this life that I'm living.


Father I love you and I know you love me...

you'll never forsake me nor will you leave.


Father I thank you for the blessings you send...

you've shown me your love and made me your friend.


Sometimes in this life I grow tired and weak...

you've given me always the strength that I seek.


I believe that you hear me whenever I call...

you light my path so I wont fall.


I know in this life your always with me...

these words of faith I will always believe.


I know in my heart, when this wicked world ends...

in heaven above, I'll be with my friend.







Night.2013

© 2013 Night


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Positive thoughts here .. I am finding it hard to "believe" these days .. The news on TV kinda makes me feel there is no one watching over us .. and we are prisoners of fate .. but yet, I pray at night, and even in daylight .. I surf the net, and look at all the beauty in this world .. and once again "I believe" .. I was raised Baptist .. ever Baptized .. I have studied the bible, and a few other inspired publications .. still, when I see the innocent suffering, I lose my faith .. And I question if there really is a God .. ..

Sorry .. I got off on me ... This is a beautiful, and hope-ful write David .. And I feel the JOY in your heart every time I read your work .. Thanks for sharing YOU ... Jazz

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Night

11 Years Ago

You saw that huh...lol. Thank you...:)
J. J.  Nightingale

11 Years Ago

Sure did ... :)
Night

11 Years Ago

...:)



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beautiful, from the heart, another great write mr night

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Night

11 Years Ago

Hi Ashly...and thank you my friend...=)
You have such a way with words, your writing makes me smile when i read it. c:

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Night

11 Years Ago

...good, I'm glad to hear that...smiling is very good for the soul...thank you very much...:)
Toni

11 Years Ago

C: That it is C:
Positive thoughts here .. I am finding it hard to "believe" these days .. The news on TV kinda makes me feel there is no one watching over us .. and we are prisoners of fate .. but yet, I pray at night, and even in daylight .. I surf the net, and look at all the beauty in this world .. and once again "I believe" .. I was raised Baptist .. ever Baptized .. I have studied the bible, and a few other inspired publications .. still, when I see the innocent suffering, I lose my faith .. And I question if there really is a God .. ..

Sorry .. I got off on me ... This is a beautiful, and hope-ful write David .. And I feel the JOY in your heart every time I read your work .. Thanks for sharing YOU ... Jazz

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Night

11 Years Ago

You saw that huh...lol. Thank you...:)
J. J.  Nightingale

11 Years Ago

Sure did ... :)
Night

11 Years Ago

...:)
This is beautiful , positive and full of faith . You seem an ardent believer of the bible quote "Faith as small as a mustard seed .... ". I loved it

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Night

11 Years Ago

I am...welcome my new friend...:)
This coincides with my own deep faith in god. I am a very believing Christian and not at all apologetic of it. Though I have my ups and downs in my relationship with God, I am proud of this relationship.
Happy to have met you and being your friend!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Night

11 Years Ago

...you're welcome my friend.:)
Amen! What a wonderful God we have. Beautifully written David.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Night

11 Years Ago

...Yes we do....thank you...:)
Love it! So very true for me.... God will always be here for us even when we don't feel like He is!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Night

11 Years Ago

...true words my friend...thank you so much and God bless you.:)
I think your tremendous strength comes within you, David...sometimes I almost wish I had 'blind faith' it really seems to work for some people. Suffice to say we have differing opinions on this topic but nonetheless I respect your beliefs and I'm in awe of your delivery of such a beautiful sentiment.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Night

11 Years Ago

...thank you Frieda very much...:)
I often find myself marveling at the absolute faith some people have in God...it really is quite a foreign concept to me. I was baptized catholic, but my immediate family never practiced religion. As I grew older, I suppose the cynic in me took the reins and steered me toward the path of evolution ;-) I like your pieces, because they are so unapologetically prayerful, just as my own are, perhaps, unapologetically clinical. Who you are is so well defined in these pieces where you praise and thank God, and that is the reason these pieces work for me. You are a truly talented writer, and I thank you so much for choosing to share your poetry with me.

-kimmer

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Night

11 Years Ago

...kimmer, thank you for your honesty my friend...I too was raised Catholic...its all I knew growing.. read more
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

An absolute pleasure, David. Thank you for the thoughtful, and thought-provoking response.
Night

11 Years Ago

...you're very welcome.:)
Magically delightful. It weaves beauty in wonderful strands.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Night

11 Years Ago

...nice to see you my friend...and thank you very much...:)

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