"The Final Call"

Do we dance with the devil

in the pale moonlight...

Or fly with angels

and make things right.

When the mockingbird comes

and the blue jays away

Will we wish for life

and younger days?

Will we dance the dance

until the curtain falls...

One life to live

one final call.

Night.2013

Author's Note

God bless...Night.2013

Reviews

[Joseph Aldridge]

I really like this poem. I can feel the message you have in this poem. I cant believe there aren't any other reviews. I read this to my grandfather (very religious man) and he enjoyed it as well. I hope others like this. Hope you have a wonderful day.

[Night]

...I see the Spirit is alive in you my friend...God bless you both....and thank you...:)

[Joseph Aldridge]

No problem. Just going around and reading and reviewing writers

[Mauricio Montoya]

these words ring ture.
Nice work.

[Night]

Thank you kindly good sir...=)

[Brittany Zedalis]

This one makes me think and I like it.

[Night]

...every one dances a dance in life...:)

[Time's The Bond]

It really does lay deep in my thoughts when I read this in the quiet.

[Night]

...Sweet, thank you for stopping by.:)

[Be myself!]

Very good. I like it

[Night]

...thank you kindly my friend...:)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Awesome thought provoking write. I love this and the message it holds is a much needed one.

[Night]

...thank you my friend...:)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome :)

[Asilem]

Such a beautiful poem. Well done. :)

[Night]

...very good then...:)

[Southern Cross]

I'm glad I happened to find your work and immerse myself in the spirituality and uplifting message they hold. As for myself, I shall dance all the way through the second curtain call :)

[Night]

...sweet.:)

[Salar Majak]

two faced people
dance with the devil at night
then you see them in the morning
with the angels flying with delight!

is the mockingbird trapped
in it's gold coated jail
will it ever be free
to soar up high again?

we shall dance forever
till the curtain fall
we''ll never stop
not forever more

you only have one life to live
so make it whole


i am soooo very sorry, i just had to write this, it hit me when i read your poem, i think it's a reply for it but i'm full of nonesence XD, so very sorry if it disturbes you
amazing poem yours is! i really don't know why it inspired me to write this :S, if you feel like it's offening your poem in any kind of way, i'll delete it,
great write yours is. enjoyed greatly!

[Night]

...my friend you honor me with your poem...thank you. There is only gladness in my heart that I can be of inspiration to others...it is the goal, I think of all poets...it should be anyway....to inspire life...thank you for honoring mine.:)

[Salar Majak]

:), no thank you for inspiring me to write this one, i am really glad you like it!

[Night]

...you're very welcome...keep that love for writing alive in your heart...that's where the good ones come from...:)

[Salar Majak]

:) i will

[Dr. Wood ?]

keep dancing the dance my friend.....This was great

[KAOlmsted]

I think the person who has truly danced until the curtain falls has done all of the above ;-) Great write, Night. Thank you for sharing it with us.

[Night]

...intuitive reply my friend...thank you and you're very welcome.:)