"The Secret Garden"

There was a garden

In every tear

Entire lives

Within a sphere.

 

Golden memories

shattered dreams

And nothing's really

As it seems.

 

A world of wonder

Far and near

Hearts that feel

Joy and fear.

 

There was a secret

In every tear

Entire lives

Within a sphere.

 

 copyright © Night.2013

Reviews

[Time's The Bond]

A nice sad flow...A joyful read.

"There was a garden

In every tear"

I like that best because it makes me think that something very wondrous happened to make the tears, like the history that made someone cry...Like a "lost" love..Or memories of place you used to enjoy with someone... But the once joyful memories/feelings just aren't there anymore.

[Night]

...I'm glad you were moved by this...thank you my friend.:)

[Brittany Zedalis]

My, I love this. The rhyming is awesome.

[Night]

Brittany, how are you? Thanks for stopping by...stay well my friend.:)

[Brittany Zedalis]

I am doing good, mostly. Starting back in classes very soon. Yay for being a college student, haha.

[Night]

...Good, very good...you take care and smile every day...it's important in this life...:)

[Brittany Zedalis]

Thank you:) You take care, too.

[Salar Majak]

this is such a beautiful poem that can work as a wonderful song!

[Night]

...well thank you very much...be safe my friend.:)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Wow I love this. So profound and beautiful.

[Night]

...well thank you very much...one of those "Deep" moments of thought.:)

[RavenWells]

Amazing as always :)

[Night]

...well thank you very much.:)

[patricia]

Beautiful poem night, very deep too. loved the picture.

[Night]

...thank you Trish...:)

[KatDarkness]

Beautiful poem :)

[Night]

...thank you my friend...:)

[Ahmad Cox]

Wow amazing. I love the otherworldly and dream like quality.

[Night]

...thank you my friend...Happy New Year.