"Will You Love Me"

"Will You Love Me"

A Poem by Night

Will you love me when I'm older

will you love me when I'm grey.



Will you always smile that smile

like you did that day.



Will you love me when I'm sad

hurt...and feeling blue.



Will you feel the way you did 

when our love was so brand new.



Will you love me more tomorrow

be my woman till the end.



Will you walk with me forever 

be my lover and my best friend.



Will you pray with me each day

giving thanks to God above...



For all that we've been blessed with

for our life and for our love.



Will you love me...





Night.2013

© 2013 Night


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When two people recite there vows, they say "till death do us part" ..
How many truly keep that sacred vow , forever after .. ?
Not many I think .. I believe You are a Man of His word, and you will respect
The vows made before God .. Don't settle for anything less than true Love ..

Beautiful, Lovely .. Jazz xx

Posted 11 Years Ago


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J. J.  Nightingale

11 Years Ago

XX J. :)
Night

11 Years Ago

maybe for you too...one can dream can't they...? Love you Jazz.:)
J. J.  Nightingale

11 Years Ago

Love you David .. xx



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Good lord, you can write such sweet poems. I love your work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Night

10 Years Ago

Ooops...I missed this one. Thank you for the love my friend....be well and live each day smiling...=.. read more
I wish people would read this before they say their vows.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Night

11 Years Ago

Awe...thank you and I agree...:)
Be myself!

11 Years Ago

Your welcome
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Aya
Nice one i like it alot, alot of questions and demand
And it gives a picture of true love as it should be when all the answers are Yes!
Wonderful poem

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Night

11 Years Ago

...yes, true love indeed....thank you...:)
lovely!! :) short and sweet.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Night

11 Years Ago

...well thank you very much...:)
No.



Well...maybe.




Okay. Yes ;-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Night

11 Years Ago

...awe kimmer, so sweet, thank you...:)
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

Always my pleasure ;-)
Nicely penned David.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Night

11 Years Ago

...Good morning my friend...hope this day shines bright for you...and thank you...:)
First thing I thought of was the Beatles, 'When I'm 64'...not too shabby for background music for your poetry reading. As usual, heartfelt and poignant David. Nice one.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Night

11 Years Ago

...thank you Frieda.:)
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

My pleasure for sure. :-)
Reads beautiful but a little difficult to follow through...
May God bless those who stay faithful and sincere till death does apart. It's a great accomplishment.
Thank you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Night

11 Years Ago

I changed the format...I think it reads better now....:)
Ayvid N

11 Years Ago

Oh yes! Even better than before. A perfect poem for an abiding loving husband-wife! :)
Night

11 Years Ago

...beautiful...:)
When two people recite there vows, they say "till death do us part" ..
How many truly keep that sacred vow , forever after .. ?
Not many I think .. I believe You are a Man of His word, and you will respect
The vows made before God .. Don't settle for anything less than true Love ..

Beautiful, Lovely .. Jazz xx

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

J. J.  Nightingale

11 Years Ago

XX J. :)
Night

11 Years Ago

maybe for you too...one can dream can't they...? Love you Jazz.:)
J. J.  Nightingale

11 Years Ago

Love you David .. xx
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Me
It made me smile, i like it a lot, wish it was longer :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Night

11 Years Ago

...thank you...:)

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Added on December 23, 2012
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